Here are pending lyrics for a new song I'm writing prior to Vday, which is tml. Following the style of Sex Machineguns frontman Anchang, I'm going to post the lyrics for everyone to see... and make constructive comments and suggestions...

The last time I had skeptics and fuckers screwing my stuff down to zzzeeerro value......

Yet it speaks, this bulky box of fluorescence
Aims a needle at my veins
Strikes; pushing copious amounts of sour emotion

A constant worry for the free and easy
For these are people who get messed up easy
From late nights, crazy hours, hard drugs, soft sleep
To that person you said you really liked

I said, Oh Well, Good luck to you
Great that you'd found someone you liked
Has he asked you out yet and when's it gonna be
Maybe it's on Valentine's day


Yet it speaks
Aims a needle at my veins
Strikes
Cutting me with all that sour emotion

In my mind I make up yes no maybe
Different ways to criticize and smother my love
Useless Ways to numb the sour injection
that your words pushed into my heart


Yet it speaks
Aims a needle at my veins
Strikes
Flooding me with all that sour emotion


If it sounds emo, it's supposed to be.


Copyright johnson soon :D